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Charcoal Graphite

Photo by Sheldon Liu on Unsplash
Morning commute, I pull the seat belt around
and clip. Did I notice the charcoal graphite

covering the hood, roof, doors and trunk,
that mixture of gray and tiny bits, paint to

catch the light? I chose this car for the safety
features when my son was born. Bodies are

no match for moving vehicles even at this
speed – 30 mph – along Pacific Coast Highway.

It can happen in the flash of a stop light, the
fragility of a moment, like the winter night

my car slid over black ice, fish tailing into a
full spin, pointing me in the opposite direction.

Alone, fright pumping through me, I
looked up – stunned – into the approaching

headlights. That would never happen here,
I mean the black ice, but facing fatalities,

the shattering glass, the splintering bones...
Here commuters hum with the ocean

rocking on the shore. Here the scent of sea
breeze seems to lap, consistent in praise

of purpose, even if there is no one watching
or noticing the sun’s joy reflected in her sparkle.
Rebecca Ramsden
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Rebecca, a retired Registered Nurse, lives in St. Paul, MN. Poetry is soul excavation, the way she finds her inner fire, and gives voice to the complex world. Rebecca's poems have been published in Whitefish Review, Haiku Crush, Tiny Seed, The Dewdrop, This Was 2020, Please See Me, Talking Stick and as winner of the Creekside Poetry contest.

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